03/26/2024
An adjective, the unsung hero of description, is a word that modifies a noun or pronoun by adding details about its qualities.✨
But here's the catch: while adjectives can be your friend, too many of them can be your story's Achilles' heel. Picture this—an FMC with cascading, flowing, golden hair, piercing, sparkling, emerald eyes, and a voice like a soft, melodious, tinkling bell. That’s a bit much, isn't it? 🤯
Now, imagine a lighter hand. Instead of drowning readers in descriptors, give them a sensory experience. Replace the collection of adjectives with carefully chosen ones that evoke emotion and paint a vivid picture. 🌈
Challenge yourself to let the narrative breathe through dynamic verbs and precise nouns. 📚
So be frugal with adjectives—let them enhance, not overshadow. 📖