Lisa Poisso - Story Coach & Editor

  • Home
  • Lisa Poisso - Story Coach & Editor

Lisa Poisso - Story Coach & Editor Story coach and editor—one-on-one guidance from story development through plotting and writing. This is where theory and practice come together. Simply awesome.

What if you finally mastered what’s going on under hood of your book—the literary engine that drives your novel and keeps readers turning pages? No more stumbling through rough drafts, then paying an editor to help you find the story inside. You’ll write smarter manuscripts from the start, from concept and story to the words on the page. You’re a busy person, and you don’t have time for endless we

binars and advice books and online courses. Now there’s a way to learn what you’re doing while you’re actually doing it, even if this is your very first novel. You’ll finish with writing techniques and knowledge you’ll use the rest of your writing career. If you’re simply looking for someone to help you polish your manuscript for publication, I may not be the right editor for your book. But if you’re ready to master what’s going on under the hood, let’s talk. (Lisa’s) the real deal. In the last six months, I have learned so much. And more than that, the voice inside my head has changed her tune. Now I hear, “You’re going to do this.”—Emile Horne


A professional communicator for more than 30 years, Lisa has coached developing journalists, content writers, and bloggers. Now she works exclusively with emerging and established authors to bring clarity to their novels. LisaPoisso.com
Let’s talk about your book: [email protected]

06/07/2024
When a character is unable to physically act, the story must dip into forces that shift their mindset. Wishful thinking ...
06/07/2024

When a character is unable to physically act, the story must dip into forces that shift their mindset. Wishful thinking isn’t enough. The character’s internal changes must trigger a transformative arc that continues to propel the plot forward.

And don’t all writers crave propulsion in their writing lives?

Effective writing goals share so much in common with effective story goals. Are you giving yourself agency in your writing career?

We’ve all read stories where the characters didn’t seem to be doing what a reasonable person would do in that situation....
05/07/2024

We’ve all read stories where the characters didn’t seem to be doing what a reasonable person would do in that situation. Heck, they’re not even doing what an unreasonable person would do. Sometimes they’re doing something else entirely. Sometimes they don’t seem to be doing much of anything at all.

A story that lacks credibility will also fail to hook readers. Credibility relies not only on the plot but also on the characters. As long as the characters forge a fathomable path into the story through their thoughts and reactions and emotions, readers will dive in alongside them.

Readers are generous souls. They enter a book ready and willing to be carried away into another world where things may work very, very differently. Did the main character actually just turn into a fly? Are we supposed to believe that the heroine would actually give up stardom for love? For the most part, readers will believe the story and follow—as long as the characters make a convincing case for themselves and the story.

So how do you make that happen?

As long as characters forge a credible path into a story through character thought and reaction, readers will dive in alongside them.

Ready to get serious about preparing your book for publication?A Clarity Audit reviews your plot, genre, narrative struc...
05/07/2024

Ready to get serious about preparing your book for publication?

A Clarity Audit reviews your plot, genre, narrative structure, character arcs, and POV, plus a 60-minute coaching call & actionable next steps. It’s your light at the end of the tunnel.

Schedule your Clarity Audit now: https://buff.ly/3RCIgLB

Did you hear the one about the songwriter who doesn’t listen to music? She doesn’t want her creativity to be tainted by ...
05/07/2024

Did you hear the one about the songwriter who doesn’t listen to music? She doesn’t want her creativity to be tainted by another musician’s sound. On the rare occasions when she makes an exception, she never listens to anything written after 1970, because nothing else resonates like the music she grew up with—her parent’s music.

If this sounds a bit daft, consider writers who don’t read. These aspiring novelists haven’t picked up a book in years because they don’t want their voices to be diluted by another author’s (if only getting genius to rub off were so easy) or because nothing can compare to the books they read twenty years ago (and the reactions and insights that apparently haven’t changed over two decades).

Junot Díaz nails the way I read—"blasphemously"—as we explore how to get along with other writers, the difference between hybrid publishing and self-publishing, and why people should read fiction.

Subscribe and read The Writes of Fiction to stay on top of what today's brightest writers, editors, and teachers are say...
04/07/2024

Subscribe and read The Writes of Fiction to stay on top of what today's brightest writers, editors, and teachers are saying about writing

READ IT: https://buff.ly/3W7rTcZ

Are you going in late and getting out early? Checking off the 3 Ws? If you don't recognize these proven storytelling tec...
04/07/2024

Are you going in late and getting out early? Checking off the 3 Ws? If you don't recognize these proven storytelling techniques, come on over to my article at Writers Helping Writers and pick up the basics for smooth scene openings.

If the opening line of a scene is the doorway to a party, next comes the welcoming handshake and introductions that draw readers into the mix.

Hard truth: In all but ideal scenarios, leaving writing messes for your editor to clean up compromises your editor’s foc...
03/07/2024

Hard truth: In all but ideal scenarios, leaving writing messes for your editor to clean up compromises your editor’s focus, leading to the kind of editorial triage that editors refer to as “polishing a turd.”

How to get your manuscript ready for editing. Why (and what) you should be reading every day. How to manage editing and feedback.

When it seems time to check in with your viewpoint character’s sense of how things are progressing, ask yourself these q...
03/07/2024

When it seems time to check in with your viewpoint character’s sense of how things are progressing, ask yourself these questions:

- How does the character think things are going so far?
- Are they closing in on their short-term and long-term goals, or are they losing ground?
- What’s their mindset when they ponder their goals: anticipation, hope, determination, trepidation, gloom?

Keep readers engaged with your characters through THE ART OF THE PROGRESS REPORT.

Stay in touch with the characters’ reactions and keep the spigot of your viewpoint character’s interior analysis flowing.

The unanticipated outcome of each scene pushes the characters urgently into the next, riding the domino or baton-passing...
02/07/2024

The unanticipated outcome of each scene pushes the characters urgently into the next, riding the domino or baton-passing effect. Scenes shouldn’t be able to be shuffled about willy-nilly; plucking an effectively crafted scene out of the flow would break the chain of action and reaction that makes one scene lead directly into the next.

Readers rightfully expect the change created by one scene to be addressed promptly in the next. This propagates reader investment: hope or worry, anticipation or suspense.

Here's the technique: https://buff.ly/4ccDoFB

He KNOWS. Employee of the Month Rémy can tell that you revised your book from front to back. His Snoot Check revealed th...
02/07/2024

He KNOWS. Employee of the Month Rémy can tell that you revised your book from front to back. His Snoot Check revealed that the last chapters smelled much less polished than the first ones.

Sympathetic to your cause, Rémy suggests another pass beginning with the last scene and working backwards toward the front of the book. Your last words deserve to be as polished as the first!

Your writing tribe gives you and your work something impossible to find within the confines of your own head: perspectiv...
02/07/2024

Your writing tribe gives you and your work something impossible to find within the confines of your own head: perspective.

Junot Díaz nails the way I read—"blasphemously"—as we explore how to get along with other writers, the difference between hybrid publishing and self-publishing, and why people should read fiction.

Isn't it time to get serious about the book you're writing?A Clarity Audit reviews your plot, genre, narrative structure...
01/07/2024

Isn't it time to get serious about the book you're writing?

A Clarity Audit reviews your plot, genre, narrative structure, character arcs, and POV, plus a 60-minute coaching call & actionable next steps. It’s your light at the end of the tunnel.

Schedule your Clarity Audit now: https://buff.ly/3RDW6xC

What's the storytelling blind spot that's NOT story structure or writing technique that makes so many manuscripts so clu...
01/07/2024

What's the storytelling blind spot that's NOT story structure or writing technique that makes so many manuscripts so clunky to read?

Scene technique.

So many writers miss learning the technique to writing great scenes—scene design and structure, what scenes can and can't accomplish in a story, how to make sure each scene pulls it weight.

I'm back with Louise and Denise, talking about scene structure and technique in a conversation they later called "a must-listen for editors and authors alike."

Listen to find out more about—

- What is a scene in a novel?
- Why are scenes important? What’s their purpose?
- Is there an ideal structure for a scene? Which components should be evident?
- Common problems with scene technique
- Tools that help authors overcome scene-technique problems

LISTEN HERE:

Quickly and easily listen to The Editing Podcast for free!

Is your manuscript wilting in the summer heat? Refresh your vision with a Clarity Audit.Get expert insight on your plot,...
01/07/2024

Is your manuscript wilting in the summer heat? Refresh your vision with a Clarity Audit.

Get expert insight on your plot, pacing, characters, themes, point of view, genre, and marketability. Whether you're at the outline stage, mid-draft, or polishing your final version, you'll uncover the breakthrough adjustments your story needs.

The Clarity Audit zeroes in on your story's framework. While I won't edit your manuscript, I'll review it to verify crucial storytelling components and spot narrative hurdles. This focused review targets the bones of your story and pinpoints areas for further development.

• Fill out the comprehensive Clarity Audit questionnaire and return it along with your manuscript a week before we chat.
• We'll connect via video chat or phone to unpack your book's potential.
• You'll get targeted advice on up to three key aspects of your craft.
• Take home a clear roadmap to steer your next steps with confidence.

Ready to beat the heat and energize your story? The Clarity Audit is available now for $349.

Book your Clarity Audit today: https://buff.ly/4cGqE9P

If your manuscript is destined for a literary agent, freelance editor, formatter, designer, publisher, or other professi...
30/06/2024

If your manuscript is destined for a literary agent, freelance editor, formatter, designer, publisher, or other professional, the standard format is Microsoft Word. Here's why.

Microsoft Word is the publishing industry standard for writing software because it has the most powerful features for high-level text editing and analysis.

Whether you’re self-publishing your novel or trying to vault to the head of the slush pile, it’s generally true that com...
30/06/2024

Whether you’re self-publishing your novel or trying to vault to the head of the slush pile, it’s generally true that commercial-quality books are supported by commercial-quality production.

Hiring skilled, experienced pros is essential for your book’s key services: cover design and blurb/jacket copy, which promise readers commercial-quality value, and editing, which delivers that value in a compelling reading experience.

Novel editing 101: what kind of editing you need, how your publishing method affects that, how to find an editor, and more.

We writerly types love to gigglesnort at memes about the men in black coming to get us based on our bizarre internet sea...
29/06/2024

We writerly types love to gigglesnort at memes about the men in black coming to get us based on our bizarre internet search histories. Frankly, I’m not sure my editorial search history is that much weirder than my gaming writer search history; both have sent me chasing down supernatural and super-natural medical, historical, mythological, and apocalyptic rabbit holes.

There’s something about picking up this particular sort of resource at the library checkout counter in person, however, that puts a blush on “Good afternoon, ma’am. Is this … all?” Like many physicians, I imagine most librarians eventually feel as though they’ve seen it all. But in the words of Junot Diaz, there are definitely weeks when I feel my checkout stack consists of “blasphemous” books that “might not be your friend.”

Loosen your ties and your tongues, O Writers, as we blasphemously barge our way through this week’s The Writes of Fiction.

Junot Díaz nails the way I read—"blasphemously"—as we explore how to get along with other writers, the difference between hybrid publishing and self-publishing, and why people should read fiction.

Finding the right editor means opening a conversation that you hope will turn into a long, creative relationship with a ...
29/06/2024

Finding the right editor means opening a conversation that you hope will turn into a long, creative relationship with a like-minded lover of books. You’ll be asking prospective editors questions that tell you if they have the professional background and approach you want for your book—and they’ll be looking for something similar from you. Who are you as an author, and what’s your book all about?

Your first inquiry to a prospective editor sets the tone for your business and creative relationship. Give them the kind of details about your book and publishing goals that will help them decide whether your manuscript will be a good fit with what they do.

Find an editor whose services are a good fit for your book. Tell prospective editors your word count, genre, budget, deadline, and more.

An editor can give you a hand out of all sorts of tight spots in your book’s development, not just writing and editing. ...
28/06/2024

An editor can give you a hand out of all sorts of tight spots in your book’s development, not just writing and editing. A seasoned outside eye can help you smooth out story issues before you start writing or help you sell your novel effectively once you’ve finished.

Not sure you’re on the right track? Your book editor may have exactly the service or expertise you need. Check out how we can help.

An editor can give you a hand out of all sorts of tight spots in your book’s development, not just writing and editing. A seasoned outside eye can help you smooth out story issues before you start writing or help you sell your novel effectively once you’ve finished.

I just updated my recommended reading list for craft books on story development.
28/06/2024

I just updated my recommended reading list for craft books on story development.

The technique of crafting stories: how they work, and what to do when yours is struggling.

Like astrology, tarot is broad enough to enable you to spy the confluences and influences surrounding your personal circ...
28/06/2024

Like astrology, tarot is broad enough to enable you to spy the confluences and influences surrounding your personal circumstances. Intriguingly close to home? You’re not wrong—that’s the power of archetypes.

And why not bring that power to your novel?

Using tarot to plumb character depths, more on reading for writers, why AI isn't going to replace authors any time soon, and some benefits of being traditionally published.

If you’re a debut author, at some point you inevitably must make your debut. You can’t run around and around in the hams...
28/06/2024

If you’re a debut author, at some point you inevitably must make your debut. You can’t run around and around in the hamster wheel forever. This isn’t your only book; it’s just your first.

Don't let perfectionism and procrastination stop your manuscript from becoming the published novel it was meant to become.

When you need your sword and shield just to confront the editing process, something’s amiss. A battle for the soul of yo...
27/06/2024

When you need your sword and shield just to confront the editing process, something’s amiss. A battle for the soul of your story and writing is a sure sign that you’re working with the wrong kind of editor, getting the wrong kind of feedback.

Don’t get steamed at the editor. Just stop working with people who don’t suit you and your book.

Your editor is your literary GPS, your cheerleader, your personal trainer and support team. You want someone who recognizes your creative destination, rallies behind you, and shines the spotlight on all the quirks that make your book distinctive (so readers can appreciate it too).

So find your editor.

This editor is too hot. That editor is too cold.

But somewhere is an editor who’s juuust right.

What to do when editing feels like a battle for your book’s soul

Could you use volunteer editing?It’s the things a nonprofessional editor doesn't know about editing—all types and levels...
26/06/2024

Could you use volunteer editing?

It’s the things a nonprofessional editor doesn't know about editing—all types and levels of editing, not just the kind that catches spelling and grammar issues and typos—that can hurt your book.

Volunteer proofreaders can help you produce a better book, but the strategy can also backfire. Here's how to balance saving money with quality results.

Intrigued by the depth and symbolism of tarot? You're not alone. Like astrology, the tarot is broad enough to enable you...
26/06/2024

Intrigued by the depth and symbolism of tarot? You're not alone. Like astrology, the tarot is broad enough to enable you to spy the confluences and influences surrounding your personal circumstances.

Why not bring that power to your novel? Archetypes are universal symbols that resonate across cultures, tapping into the collective unconscious. By incorporating tarot or other symbolic systems into your writing, you can add layers of meaning and resonance that elevate your story.

Don't limit yourself to just one source of inspiration. Draw from a variety of influences: mythology, folklore, dreams, even your own life experiences. Weave these diverse elements together to create a rich, multidimensional narrative that captivates readers.

So pour yourself a cup of tea, shuffle the cards, and let the archetypes guide you on your novel-writing journey. The results might just surprise you.

Using tarot to plumb character depths, more on reading for writers, why AI isn't going to replace authors any time soon, and some benefits of being traditionally published.

Just updated my Publishing Resources page with a link to Brooke Warner's superb, informative take on "The definitive dif...
26/06/2024

Just updated my Publishing Resources page with a link to Brooke Warner's superb, informative take on "The definitive difference between hybrid publishing and self-publishing." Get informed about your options!

My favorite publishing resources: querying agents and publishers, finding a cover artist, self-publishing processes, marketing and promotion, and more.

Before you jump the gun and publish a premature effort, learn what many authors wish they’d known before they started wr...
25/06/2024

Before you jump the gun and publish a premature effort, learn what many authors wish they’d known before they started writing their book.

Everything you wish you'd known before you started writing your first novel, from how to get started to where you'll end up.

Address


Alerts

Be the first to know and let us send you an email when Lisa Poisso - Story Coach & Editor posts news and promotions. Your email address will not be used for any other purpose, and you can unsubscribe at any time.

Contact The Business

Send a message to Lisa Poisso - Story Coach & Editor:

Videos

Shortcuts

  • Address
  • Alerts
  • Contact The Business
  • Videos
  • Claim ownership or report listing
  • Want your business to be the top-listed Media Company?

Share

What’s going on under the hood of your novel?

What if you finally mastered what’s going on under hood of your book—the literary engine that drives your novel and keeps readers turning pages?

No more stumbling through rough drafts, then paying an editor to help you find the story inside. You’ll write smarter manuscripts from the start, from concept and story to the words on the page. This is where theory and practice come together.

You’re a busy person, and you don’t have time for endless webinars and advice books and online courses. Now there’s a way to learn what you’re doing while you’re actually doing it, even if this is your very first novel. You’ll finish with writing techniques and knowledge you’ll use the rest of your writing career.

If you’re simply looking for someone to help you polish your manuscript for publication, I may not be the right editor for your book. But if you’re ready to master what’s going on under the hood, let’s talk.