The Savvy Red Pen

The Savvy Red Pen Elegant editing. Precise proofreading. Remarkable results. The wrong word makes you infamous and weak.

“The difference between the right word and the almost right word is the difference between lightning and a lightning bug.”
― Mark Twain

The right word makes you famous and powerful. The Savvy Red Pen provides free lance elegant editing, precise proofing, and remarkable results. I encourage writers by embracing their vision, by complementing them while remaining innovative, and by helping them pr

oduce the phenomenal and the memorable. Business services include:
Annual Reports
Proposals
Brochures/Advertisements
Newsletters
Manuals
Website/Blogs
Books
Scripts/Speeches

Academic services
College admissions and scholarship essays

Today we honor civil rights activist Rosa Parks, who in 1955 refused to give up her seat in the “colored” section of an ...
12/01/2025

Today we honor civil rights activist Rosa Parks, who in 1955 refused to give up her seat in the “colored” section of an Alabama bus to a white man.

Her words resound today:
“You must never be fearful about what you are doing when it is right.”

She stood up for rights by sitting down.

That’s a pretty tall lake!How about this instead:🖋️ "Lake Compounce boasts the tallest Christmas tree in Connecticut at ...
11/28/2025

That’s a pretty tall lake!

How about this instead:
🖋️ "Lake Compounce boasts the tallest Christmas tree in Connecticut at 100 feet tall."


Counting my blessings today and wishing you all a wonderful Thanksgiving surrounded by the people you love, whether they...
11/27/2025

Counting my blessings today and wishing you all a wonderful Thanksgiving surrounded by the people you love, whether they’re sitting next to you, across the miles, or in spirit.

Liesel took the 5-Day Writing Challenge and kickstarted the book in her head onto paper with concepts and ideas taught i...
11/25/2025

Liesel took the 5-Day Writing Challenge and kickstarted the book in her head onto paper with concepts and ideas taught in the challenge. She's well on her journey to becoming an author!

✍️ Join me for the next FREE 5-Day Nonfiction Writing Challenge!
🗓️ January 12 - 16, 2026
🕛 Noon to 1:15 PM EST
💻 Daily Zoom Meetings

🎁 Plus, get $50 OFF for the 45-Day Nonfiction Writing Program beginning January 21, 2026!

🔗 For more info & to register, visit: https://bit.ly/3HGDtmt






Feeling grateful for all the incredible authors I’ve worked with this year. Your words make the world brighter.❤️ I see ...
11/24/2025

Feeling grateful for all the incredible authors I’ve worked with this year. Your words make the world brighter.

❤️ I see you, I hear you, I love you. I respect you for your bravery, talent, devotion, discipline, and resilience. And I'm humbled that you trusted me with your story.

Thanks for working with me, whether you participated in the 5-day and 45-day programs, 1-and-1 coaching, or the Word Warriors writing group. Special thanks to authors who gifted me the opportunity to edit and proofread your manuscripts so I could help you create a book you could hold in your hands and be proud of.

Thousands of parishioners suddenly became vegetarians...
11/21/2025

Thousands of parishioners suddenly became vegetarians...


Diane learned the skills in the challenge to get closer to fulfilling her dream of becoming an author!Accept the challen...
11/20/2025

Diane learned the skills in the challenge to get closer to fulfilling her dream of becoming an author!

Accept the challenge and take your words from head to paper to gain motivation, focus, and confidence to push your book forward.
Space is limited to 8 writers!

✍️ Join me for the next FREE 5-Day Nonfiction Writing Challenge!
🗓️ January 12 - 16, 2026
🕛 Noon to 1:15 PM EST
💻 Daily Zoom Meetings

🎁 Plus, get $50 OFF for the 45-Day Nonfiction Writing Program beginning January 21, 2026!

🔗 For more info & to register, visit: https://bit.ly/3HGDtmt






Midweek MotivationYou don’t have to write the right words. You just have to write the words.So many writers get stuck wa...
11/19/2025

Midweek Motivation

You don’t have to write the right words. You just have to write the words.

So many writers get stuck waiting for the “perfect sentence” or the “right way” to say something. But here’s the truth: perfection is built through progress, not hesitation.

Every messy draft, every awkward paragraph, every “I’m not sure this makes sense” line is a step closer to clarity.

So keep going. Get the words out. The right ones will reveal themselves later.

And guess what, you'll move forward when the time is right to work with your writing coach and editor.

Spring blooms, summer glows, fall whispers, winter knows.Each season has its charm—but not its capital letter.Grammar Ti...
11/18/2025

Spring blooms, summer glows, fall whispers, winter knows.
Each season has its charm—but not its capital letter.

Grammar Tip: Don’t Let the Seasons Trip You Up
Seasons—spring, summer, fall, winter—are not capitalized because they’re common nouns, not proper ones.
✅ Correct: I love summer evenings.
❌ Incorrect: I love Summer evenings.

Exceptions:
✅ At the start of a sentence
✅ In a title or proper noun (e.g., 2025 Fall Festival)
✅ When personified (Winter wrapped the town in her quiet embrace.)

⭐️ Why the confusion?
Because months and days are capitalized, and we see seasons wrongly capitalized so often that it starts to look right.
So, unless it’s part of a name or a poetic choice, keep your seasons lowercase.

I’m so grateful to work with such talented writers like Lisa. Sharing her writing journey was pure delight. Her kind wor...
11/17/2025

I’m so grateful to work with such talented writers like Lisa. Sharing her writing journey was pure delight.

Her kind words mean so much.

Here’s an excerpt from Lisa's Acknowledgments that was particularly moving to me:

"To my writing coach and editor, Gail Kerzner, The Savvy Red Pen, who cheered me on and reminded me to keep going when I got frustrated or frozen.

Thank you for holding space for me creatively and personally. You not only helped me write a book I love but also helped me grow as an individual through my writing."




Some felonies going down at Math Lab...The moral here is: Don't do M**h and make TV graphics. You'll be left counting th...
11/14/2025

Some felonies going down at Math Lab...
The moral here is: Don't do M**h and make TV graphics. You'll be left counting the errors.


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“The difference between the right word and the almost right word is the difference between lightning and a lightning bug.” ― Mark Twain The right word makes you famous and powerful. The wrong word makes you infamous and weak. The Savvy Red Pen provides freelance elegant editing, precise proofing, and remarkable results. I encourage writers by embracing their vision, by complementing them while remaining innovative, and by helping them produce the phenomenal and the memorable. Business services include: Annual Reports Proposals Brochures/Advertisements Newsletters Manuals Website/Blogs Books Scripts/Speeches Academic services include: Theses and Dissertations Textbooks