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The Savvy Red Pen Elegant editing. Precise proofreading. Remarkable results. The wrong word makes you infamous and weak.

“The difference between the right word and the almost right word is the difference between lightning and a lightning bug.”
― Mark Twain

The right word makes you famous and powerful. The Savvy Red Pen provides free lance elegant editing, precise proofing, and remarkable results. I encourage writers by embracing their vision, by complementing them while remaining innovative, and by helping them pr

oduce the phenomenal and the memorable. Business services include:
Annual Reports
Proposals
Brochures/Advertisements
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Manuals
Website/Blogs
Books
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College admissions and scholarship essays

There’s an em dash rumor. If there’s an em dash in your writing, you must have used AI. BS!Yes, AI tends to overuse the ...
07/01/2025

There’s an em dash rumor. If there’s an em dash in your writing, you must have used AI. BS!

Yes, AI tends to overuse the em dash. But the em dash is a classic, time-tested tool in strong writing. It adds emphasis, creates drama, and helps guide the reader’s eye — when used intentionally.

Writers have been using em dashes long before AI came along — from Emily Dickinson to modern essayists.

1) Use an em dash to show a break in a thought.
✅ Example: I chose to visit my favorite country—Italy.
Sometimes they're used singly, sometimes in pairs.
Example: I bought some dark chocolate—the kind you like—so I can make cookies tonight.

2) Use an em dash to show “that is” information.
✅ Example: I got the ingredients we were missing to make mac and cheese—namely, milk, butter, pasta, and cheese.

⭐️ Bonus tip #1 ⬇️
Keyboard shortcut on a Mac is Shift + Option + –
Keyboard shortcut on a PC is Control + Alt + –

⭐️ ⭐️ Bonus tip #2 ⬇️
Do not put spaces around the em dash for Chicago Manual of Style. (For books)




Happy Canada Day to our friends up north!Who are some famous Canadians?✅ Terry Fox, organizer of the one-man Marathon of...
07/01/2025

Happy Canada Day to our friends up north!
Who are some famous Canadians?
✅ Terry Fox, organizer of the one-man Marathon of Hope
✅ Roberta Bondar, first Canadian woman in space
✅ Alexander Graham Bell, lived portions of his life in Canda
On the pop culture scene:
✅ Jim Carrey
✅ Justin Bieber
✅ Seth Rogan
✅ Keanu Reeves
✅ Wayne Gretzky

I guess adoption is NOT an option.I wouldn't scan the QR code. It's a trap. The police are showing up to haul you away i...
06/27/2025

I guess adoption is NOT an option.
I wouldn't scan the QR code. It's a trap. The police are showing up to haul you away if you're looking for advice on how to feed newborns to other kids.




Tuesday Tips & Tricks - When do we say Yay, Yea, Yeah, or Yes?Decisions, decisions, decisions. Grammar girl Mignon Fogar...
06/24/2025

Tuesday Tips & Tricks - When do we say Yay, Yea, Yeah, or Yes?

Decisions, decisions, decisions. Grammar girl Mignon Fogarty says: Yay shows feelings like excitement, joy, happiness, triumph, and approval. Yea and yeah also say “yes” or “indeed.” The Beatles sang, “She loves you, yeah, yeah, yeah.” So there.



Welcome Back Summer! We're glad you're here. What's your fave summer activity? You can catch me wherever there's water, ...
06/20/2025

Welcome Back Summer! We're glad you're here. What's your fave summer activity? You can catch me wherever there's water, sun, and music.

I do not believe that this fabric softener is "Spring Fresh" at all. No one saw this before it went to print? What a dra...
06/20/2025

I do not believe that this fabric softener is "Spring Fresh" at all. No one saw this before it went to print? What a drastic, embarrassing graphic fail. It's called kerning--the space between letters.

Celebrate Freedom!On June 19, 1865, 2,000 Union troops came to Galveston, Texas. The army announced that more than 250,0...
06/19/2025

Celebrate Freedom!
On June 19, 1865, 2,000 Union troops came to Galveston, Texas. The army announced that more than 250,000 enslaved Black people in the state were free by executive order.
On June 17, 2021, President Biden signed a bill making “Juneteenth” a federal holiday.

𝗧𝗼𝘄𝗮𝗿𝗱 𝗼𝗿 𝗧𝗼𝘄𝗮𝗿𝗱𝘀? 𝗘𝘃𝗲𝗿 𝗴𝗲𝘁 𝘁𝗿𝗶𝗽𝗽𝗲𝗱 𝘂𝗽 𝗯𝘆 𝘁𝗵𝗲𝘀𝗲 𝘁𝘄𝗼?Here’s the good news: both are correct!They mean the same thing—show...
06/17/2025

𝗧𝗼𝘄𝗮𝗿𝗱 𝗼𝗿 𝗧𝗼𝘄𝗮𝗿𝗱𝘀? 𝗘𝘃𝗲𝗿 𝗴𝗲𝘁 𝘁𝗿𝗶𝗽𝗽𝗲𝗱 𝘂𝗽 𝗯𝘆 𝘁𝗵𝗲𝘀𝗲 𝘁𝘄𝗼?

Here’s the good news: both are correct!
They mean the same thing—showing direction, movement, or attitude in relation to something.
The only difference?

👉 "Toward" is more common in American English
👉 "Towards" is more common in British English

📍 Example:

I walked toward the coffee shop. 🇺🇸
I walked towards the coffee shop. 🇬🇧
Same meaning. Just a tiny difference in style.

So use whichever feels natural to you—or match the version of English you’re writing in. Simple as that! 😊✍️
Just be consistent.

PS. The same "rule" applies to
forward/forwards
backward/backwards
upward/upwards
downward/downwards
afterward/afterwards
You're welcome.

🗓️ The next 45 days are going to pass whether you write or not. What if you chose to make real progress?One decision. 🖋️...
06/16/2025

🗓️ The next 45 days are going to pass whether you write or not. What if you chose to make real progress?

One decision. 🖋️📕 One challenge.
Are you in?

The next 45-Day Writing Program starts June 18th! This is your LAST CALL to Join the next 45-Day Writing Program and get on the path to published. 📕 📙 📘

Visit our website for more information & register today:
➡️ https://bit.ly/3i6c3O8



Expressing love and gratitude to all father figures—dads, uncles, brothers, grandpas, friends, and mentors.Happy Father'...
06/15/2025

Expressing love and gratitude to all father figures—dads, uncles, brothers, grandpas, friends, and mentors.

Happy Father's Day!

How romantic!
06/13/2025

How romantic!


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“The difference between the right word and the almost right word is the difference between lightning and a lightning bug.” ― Mark Twain The right word makes you famous and powerful. The wrong word makes you infamous and weak. The Savvy Red Pen provides freelance elegant editing, precise proofing, and remarkable results. I encourage writers by embracing their vision, by complementing them while remaining innovative, and by helping them produce the phenomenal and the memorable. Business services include: Annual Reports Proposals Brochures/Advertisements Newsletters Manuals Website/Blogs Books Scripts/Speeches Academic services include: Theses and Dissertations Textbooks