23/04/2024
THE NIGHT CLEANER'S CRUSH
EPISODE 45
On the eve of the funeral, the crowd stood up singing as the funeral parlour car reversed inside. An woman handed over white candles and they lit them standing up
Man: makawana re thuseng foo!
Young men rushed out and helped bring the coffin inside, ontop was a smaller nyana princess sophia coffin for the baby girl who died of lack of oxygen after being stuck in her mother's birth canal during labour. When the surgery was done she was already dead and poor Thandi died of excessive bleeding post surgery since she was already anaemic
Kgosi looked at the coffins and hid his face fighting tears. The pastor went to the pulpit and started talking about death and its lack of power. He spoke a lot about the after life and repentance and the crowd punctuated with shouts of amen and hallelujah
Some people pointed at Kgosi nodding at his directions with whispers so much he became uncomfortable, he picked Bogosi up and went outside. Hlelo, a distant cousin of Thandi's approached him
Hlelo: are you ok?
Kgosi: yeah! I was just avoiding the stares you know. I guess everyone wants to know the poor husband
Hlelo brushed his shoulder compassionately
Hlelo: i can take him of you want
Referring to Bogosi but Kgosi shook his head
Kgosi: i feel better with him nearby
Hlelo: ok!
She left joining the singing group of mourners
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Kaelo sat in the sitting room constantly checking the time as he waited for his wife. Ranewa used to never come home late without notifying her husband. He was beggining to worry about the subtle changes in his wife attitude and behaviour of these days. Just as he was about to call her again the door opened and she got in
Kaelo: babe, i was getting worried
Ranewa: i got caught up at work and there was an accident on the way causing a traffic jam
Kaelo: nkabo o leditse, ne ke le worrried ke ipotsa gore gorileng especially because one osa arabe mogala
Ranewa looked at the time smiling
Ranewa: ao, ten ga ise a chae tlherra ga go that late
Kaelo felt a chill on his bones, he couldn't put a finger on it but there was something he couldnt figure out ka this woman
Kaelo: babe, kante ke eng okare o changile, you not giving me as much attention as before. Re sharp
Ranewa: why wouldn't we after three years of marriage when we were ok nako tsa o tlhele o llela Tumi mo okare ke nna ke go tlhadisitseng?
Kaelo kept quiet swallowing with his head down
Ranewa: iyoo motho ya go ithoballa o lapile, ke gore i come home late just once, once ebile ke dipuonyana
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After the funeral the next day, Motse dodged everyone going where the hairdresser directed him. It was a small dirty open bar and restaurant and he found mmaBee behind the counter
Motse: (hiding his ring marked finger) i heard your name ke MmaBee, can we talk?
MmaBee: o batlang?
Motse: i felt a connection between us maloba tlhemma, i want to share a life with you
She got from behind the counter and they walked outside
MmaBee: really? In that ten minutes
Motse: (smiling) yeah! Connection ke dilo tsa two minutes, if your heart knows it knows
MmaBee: fine but we need to do things differently, take baby steps
Motse: ok, i would like that
MmaBee: (smiling shly) mhmmm
Motse embraced her kissing her
FEW WEEKS LATER
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