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10/10/2013
Short story writers! Don't forget that you need to be reading the best of what's out there. "Finis" for example, is a gr...
09/09/2013

Short story writers! Don't forget that you need to be reading the best of what's out there. "Finis" for example, is a great example of compelling character drama, coupled with an (all too rare) apocalyptic storyline.

The Oxford books of SF, Fantasy, and of Ghost Stories, were invaluable in helping me better understand good storytelling, and gave me a century's worth of exploration of what ifs.

Class is in session.

This is the definitive collection of the twentieth-century's most characteristic genre--science fiction. The tales are organized chronologically to give readers a sense of how the genre's range, vitality, and literary quality have evolved over time. Each tale offers a unique vision, an altered re...

07/09/2013

Forgot to post earlier, three writing contests coming up, with October 31 deadlines, via WritersMarket.com :

The Patricia Bibby First Book Award is offered annually for the best previously unpublished first book of poetry. The winner receives $1,000 and book publication. Entries must be postmarked by October 31.

DIAGRAM Essay Contest is an annual for previously unpublished essays up to 10,000 words in length. The winner receives $1,000 and publication. Deadline: October 31.

PEN/Faulkner Award for Fiction is offered annually for the best previously previously published book of fiction. The winner receives $15,000 and four finalists receive $5,000 each. Deadline: October 31.

The point--or points--of view, and the tense you write your story in, dramatically (ahem) change the feel of the story. ...
06/09/2013

The point--or points--of view, and the tense you write your story in, dramatically (ahem) change the feel of the story. First person present is the most immediate, third person past gives the most distance. Make your choices with a reason for doing so.

I think this just about covers it!------------------------------------Tag following quoted dialog:"That's fine. Whatever...
08/08/2013

I think this just about covers it!

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Tag following quoted dialog:
"That's fine. Whatever you decide," he said.
"That's fine. What does she think?" he said.

Tag preceding quoted dialog:
He said, "That's fine. Whatever you decide."
He said, "That's fine. What does she think?"

Tag between two separate dialog sentences:
"That's fine," he said. "Whatever you decide."
"That's fine," he said. "What does she think?"
- or -
"That's fine." He said, "Whatever you decide."
"That's fine." He said, "What does she think?"

Tag interrupting a dialog sentence:
"That," he said, "is fine. Whatever you decide."
"That, "he said, "is fine. What does she think?"

Dialog without a tag, but with an associated narrative sentence

Narrative sentence following quoted dialog:
"That's fine. Whatever you decide." He shrugged.
"That's fine. What does she think?" He shrugged.

Narrative sentence preceding quoted dialog:
He shrugged. "That's fine. Whatever you decide."
He shrugged. "That's fine. What does she think?"

Narrative sentence between two separate dialog sentences:
"That's fine." He shrugged. "Whatever you decide."
"That's fine." He shrugged. "What does she think?"


Dialog ending with an exclamation point, ellipsis, or emdash follows the same pattern as the question mark.

http://www.absolutewrite.com/forums/showthread.php?t=133858

Dialog Punctuation and Capitalization Grammar and Syntax

Don't tell me the moon is shining; show me the glint of light on broken glass.-Anton ChekhovShow, don't tell. Remember n...
03/08/2013

Don't tell me the moon is shining; show me the glint of light on broken glass.
-Anton Chekhov

Show, don't tell.

Remember now, this is not an either/or; this is a both.

Brilliant and funny vision/expansion of the classic story arc--complete with unreliable narrator.
19/07/2013

Brilliant and funny vision/expansion of the classic story arc--complete with unreliable narrator.

Readers go for a ride.

"VIDA started it. In 2010, they published the first iteration of "The Count", a straightforward analysis of how literary...
28/06/2013

"VIDA started it. In 2010, they published the first iteration of "The Count", a straightforward analysis of how literary coverage is affected by gender. For a range of notable publications, VIDA calculated the proportion of books reviewed that were by women, and the proportion of reviewers that were women, and published pie charts illustrating their findings. They published similar analyses for 2011 and, most recently, for 2012. Each year, a consistent imbalance has been observed: more books by men are reviewed, and more book reviewers are men...."

Read more at the link.

VIDA started it. In 2010, they published the first iteration of "The Count", a straightforward analysis of how literary coverage is affected by gender. For a range of notable publications, VIDA calculated the proportion of books reviewed that were by women, and the proportion of reviewers that were…

July Writing ContestsBellevue Literary Review Goldenberg Prize for Fiction is offered annually for the best short story ...
20/06/2013

July Writing Contests

Bellevue Literary Review Goldenberg Prize for Fiction is offered annually for the best short story related to health, healing, illness, the mind and body. The winner receives $1,000 and publication in the Bellevue Literary Review. Deadline: July 1.
Arizona Authors' Association Annual National Literary Contest and Book Awards offers multiple awards in various categories. Top prizes of $100, as well as other amounts, are available. Deadline: July 1.
RATTLE Poetry Prize is offered annually for the best previously unpublished poem. Grand prize receives $5,000 and publication in RATTLE. Deadline: July 15.


Bellevue
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Website: www.blreview.org

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Rattle
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Submission E-mail: [email protected]
Website: www.rattle.com

Here's the thing. When you decide you want to insult a large swath of people at one go, and particularly when that swath...
18/06/2013

Here's the thing. When you decide you want to insult a large swath of people at one go, and particularly when that swath of people write for a living, make doubly sure you don't start off with an error-laden announcement of your intentions.

Author Sonya Ray interviews her editor. It's funny to think back to that first set of back-and-forths, and my astonishme...
09/06/2013

Author Sonya Ray interviews her editor. It's funny to think back to that first set of back-and-forths, and my astonishment when she said, "oh yeah, I have seven books written already." And here I thought my five in progress were impressive....

Let's start June with my rockin' Editor: John Cameron McClain

John and I first met as I was fumbling my way through Twitter. We started chatting back and forth and he discovered that I had a seven-novel series just laying around. He immediately encouraged me to publish my work.

All of mine and John's first correspondents were through my Android! I didn't have internet and I didn't have a laptop. I would write all my notes to him and I think I even did my first review on my phone! John said I was either crazy or very determined!

John is a big part of Sweet Tea. Besides professionally editing my book, I told him some ideas that I wanted for a cover and created a great cover - which will be revealed the end of July - the first of August.

I have learned a lot from John in the last year. He is a great Editor and a great person. The greatest thing about John? His support. He has been supportive from day one and is always encouraging. He is very busy because he has several things going on besides just being an Editor, but he always finds time for his writers and the on-going support is greatly appreciated!

The best thing John has ever said to me so far: "I can see the pony!" After reading Sweet Tea.

A memory with John (so far) that I will never forget: The waterproof shoes :)

Introducing my Editor - John Cameron McClain

Q: First off, tell everyone a little bit about yourself and what you do.

And first off back, Sonya, thanks for having me on! My name is John Cameron McClain. Born in Huntsville, Alabama, lived in various places on the planet. What I do…. Hmm. I live. I live quite successfully, in fact. Here I am, typing away, alive! To stay sane, I write. To stay insane, I edit. Or is it the other way round? I write, edit, and read. I do those things.

Q: What do you like to do in your spare time?

Fortunately for me, a number of friends live in the Bay area where I am located now, and I’ve been doing some visiting here and there. I like hanging out and talking. Other than that, I like checking out new places, doing some yoga, drinking beers, cooking and eating good food, and watching the occasional TV show. I’m currently working my way through Supernatural, which is a (surprisingly) complex TV series. Supernatural references other TV shows, movies and novels, and are constantly breaking the Fourth Wall. For example, in one episode the brothers are thrown into a reality in which they aren’t brothers, but rather actors named Jensen Ackles and Jared Padalecki. I grew up on TV so I am still drawn to that medium, though I watch a lot less than I used to.

Q: What makes you the happiest?

Other than writing? Had to put that in there, you understand. I love hiking. There’s a meditative quality to walking in a forest or hiking up a hill or mountain, at least the way I was trained. Fresh air, birdsong, the chaos and order of the surroundings, it’s magical. A close second is watching people get better at writing. At least so far, all my writers have shown a lot of improvement from their first works. Knowing I was able to explain something well enough for someone to get it, and learn from it, is priceless. I get really excited when I read a new passage or story and I can see the improvement.

Q: When you were a kid, what did you want to be when you grew up?

I was raised on adventure stories, so I guess I’ve always considered myself an adventurer. My mom bought me a set of Tom Swift (Jr.) books when I was pretty young, and even if the stories were a bit dated, they were about kids with big high-tech toys and nefarious villains to defeat, which is all I ever needed. Those were formative books, I’d say. My grandfather was a flight surgeon for the Mercury, Gemini and Apollo space programs, and when I visited my grandparents we always went to the Huntsville Space and Rocket Center, so space travel’s been in my mind for a very long time as well. I did a lot of drawing from when I was ten years old or so, and met up with friends who liked to hang out and draw too. I suppose “Visual Artist” was one early idea for what I wanted to be in life. By the
end of my first round of university, it was animator. By 30 it was English teacher. By 36 it was graphic designer. At 43 I realized I needed to tell stories one way or the other, and started figuring out how to do so most effectively. Here I am at 50, writing books. Not sure how to answer the “when you grew up” part. I’ll let you know when that happens.

Q: Since I am introducing you into the literary world, let’s talk books. What is your favorite book and why?

Ooh, the literary world! I would have had my best suit dry-cleaned if I’d known it was that kind of party. Oh well, I at
least have a bow tie handy.

For the life of me I cannot figure out who can even come close to pinning down their top ten favorite books, let alone their Number One. Though I’m sorely tempted to say Michael Crichton’s Andromeda Strain for very specific, writing-related reasons, I’m going to stay literary (since I have my bow tie on), and go with Thomas Pynchon’s novel Gravity’s Rainbow. As a long-time lover of speculative fiction of all kinds, any story that crosses into Spec-Fic territory is going to pique my interest. I’m guessing I picked Gravity’s Rainbow up because it was Pynchon, and because the story was supposed to be offbeat, but by the time I was through my first read, I was completely enthralled by the depth, scale, and precision of the story. It’s not the easiest of novels to get through—one of many reasons being that it has 400 characters, in 800 pages of story (you do the math)—but Pynchon draws a stunning landscape, and throws some very human characters into it.

Q: Who is your favorite author and why?

Again with the sole favorites! Impossible! Dan Simmons comes to mind, and Emily Brontë, Roger Zelazny, Jonathan Safran Foer, Ursula K. LeGuin, David Mitchell, Mary Roach, H.P. Lovecraft, China Mieville, Robin Hobb…. I mean, come on! Ugh! Umm, let’s go with Samuel L. Clemens for today. The more I know about him, the more intriguing a human being he becomes. The perilous truth about any writing is that the most successful writers dig out painful, hidden secrets within themselves and put them into their stories. When you see the conflicted, loving, cynical genius behind Connecticut Yankee, and The Mysterious Stranger, the stories get this strange resonance to them. You’re hearing this man’s thoughts on paper. And branding himself as “Mark Twain?” Talk about a brilliant marketing scheme! One of my professors at the university pointed out that only Stephen Colbert has come close to creating such a complete alter-ego. Amazing person, amazing stories.

Q: Bragging rights - This is your time to shine! Tell about your kids, spouse, awards, accomplishments - go ahead; brag a A LOT!

Bragging? Okay, I’ll give it a shot. I had earned a few educational credits from my days at Americorps as a volunteer, so I went to the University of Hawaii and took a couple of courses. As it turned out, I ate them up. I devoured the material, gluttonously. I pigged out, and went back for thirds. An A+ in meteorology for a guy who’s science skills are remedial at best! Although I know my life experience helped me greatly in my attempt to succeed at school, I also know that, for example, the semester that I took five English courses—three writing intensive, with some 60 pages of reading a night as well—was a tremendous challenge for me, life experience notwithstanding. I worked really hard for my 3.87 GPA, and I worked really hard on my Honors project, which is why I won Best Presentation Poster, Best Oral Presentation, and Highest Honors for my project. I planted my flag, is what I did. I’m proud of what I did at school, and am very grateful for the opportunity to have studied with such amazing minds. In the end, achievement in what a person really loves doing is the finest reward I can think of.

Q: Please share any upcoming events or future plans that you have:

I plan to keep writing! The Five Watchers is out now, next comes a collection of short stories, then Alliance (zombie-vampire-human novel), then Kamaitachi (the sequel to The Five Watchers), then Devi (sentient robot novel), then Megiddo (last in the Five Watchers series). Short stories in-between. There’s another novel in progress that I started for National Novel Writing Month, but that’s way down the road. I’m trying to stay focused on the next five for now.

The last question is for those who have read Sweet Tea. Please share your favorite part of the book.

Well, I like all of it of course! Unfortunately, it’s hard to talk about my favorite part since it happens fairly close to the end of the novel, and is a pivotal point in the story. Let’s put it this way, the first hints at revelation of Lizzie’s true nature and abilities send the tension in the story way, way up. Lizzie’s characterization at the start is intentionally tricky—she starts out as a nice girl who has some great friends and a rather normal life. By the end, the reader finally understands that things are not what they seem, and that the story is going to become a whole lot bigger as the series goes on. I appreciate a story that builds and builds. All great stories do that.


Follow John on Twitter:
https://twitter.com/jcameronmcclain

Some straightforward advice for self-published writers.
06/06/2013

Some straightforward advice for self-published writers.

How Can I Possibly Write AND Market? Here’s How!By Rachel Thompson(Image purchased from Vectorstock.com) I have no time to write because I’m marketing. OR I have no time to market because I’m writing. OR I can’t possibly do both!When did it have to be either/or?It doesn’t! And if you don’t think you...

24/05/2013

This is a bit late, since I attended the event on Wednesday, but Goodreads hosted an get-together in their downtown SF office, and had a few things to say about their site and books. A couple of notes on things to keep in mind about Goodreads:

-Recommendations and ratings drive book visibility--and more specifically, 30-50 ratings raise your visibility enough to get onto their "trending" radar. One of the presenters showed a graph of an indie novel that within a year of publication was picked up by a major publishing house due to the popularity it had on Goodreads. Seemed like 30+ reviews gets the ball rolling, so to speak.

-Giveaway events gain a lot of attention. At present, Goodreads only sponsors giveaway events of hard copies, so it behooves you to get a copy up on CreateSpace or other printing company, and to try a Giveaway event on their site.

-They are working on improvements to their recommendations engine to further highlight indie/lesser-known books. As one presenter said, "no one needs a recommendation for Harry Potter anyway." Indeed.

-Listopia lists are good for raising your book's visibility. While the presenter said he thought it was a bit sketchy to put one's own work on "Best Of" lists, I put mine on "New Indie Novels for 2013" without a twinge of guilt. It's up to each author to decide what's too blatant and shameless a self-promotion move, of course.

In terms of demographics, 50% of the site membership are under 50, and 55% are American. I'm pretty sure the presenter said their membership roughly parallels book-buying demographics, which means a significant majority of members are women. Know your demographics!

I was a bit leery of the claim that Goodreads will not be influenced by Amazon.com purchasing them, but we can hope that Amazon sees the advantage to letting this reader-focused site stay as is.

Overall, it was a great meeting. The folks are really dedicated to keeping reading alive. If you're not already on Goodreads, now's a good time to get registered.

Writer's Digest has extended their submissions deadline for self-published works to May 31. $100 for the first entry, $7...
11/05/2013

Writer's Digest has extended their submissions deadline for self-published works to May 31. $100 for the first entry, $75 for each additional entry.

Whether you’re a professional writer, a part-time freelancer or a self-starting student, enter the only competition for self-published books.

Simple things, but important nonetheless. A quick checklist for every author. Does your work hit all ten?
04/05/2013

Simple things, but important nonetheless. A quick checklist for every author. Does your work hit all ten?

Here's a guest post from bestseller Brenda Novak, who reveals 10 key basics to writing a great novel.

Three simple words....
02/05/2013

Three simple words....

It would have been good to remember this.

(H/T Johann Thorsson)"No matter what it is you think you’re writing about, the best and most significant thing to write ...
01/05/2013

(H/T Johann Thorsson)

"No matter what it is you think you’re writing about, the best and most significant thing to write about, what you’re always writing about, is people."
-Harlan Ellison

30/04/2013

Simile!

"For a moment the last sunshine fell with romantic affection upon her glowing face; her voice compelled me forward breathlessly as I listened – then the glow faded, each light deserting her with lingering regret, like children leaving a pleasant street at dusk."
-The Great Gatsby (F. Scott Fitzgerald)

$$ for things to read, or $$ for my editing services. Help fund me, my writers, and future books! (And please share this...
29/04/2013

$$ for things to read, or $$ for my editing services. Help fund me, my writers, and future books! (And please share this post if you're feeling in a sharing mood.)

My name is John Cameron McClain, and this is why youll be interested in helping me achieve my goal of starting up an indie author small press: not only are you helping nine eager and dedicated writers (including myself), youre investing in at six of my novels (one published, five in progress). I...

Happy birthday to W***y Shakes!
23/04/2013

Happy birthday to W***y Shakes!

1,000 True Fans. I've heard writers quote 500, but yes, at a certain point, momentum comes into play as well.
20/04/2013

1,000 True Fans. I've heard writers quote 500, but yes, at a certain point, momentum comes into play as well.

The long tail is famously good news for two classes of people; a few lucky aggregators, such as Amazon and Netflix, and 6 billion consumers. Of those two, I think consumers earn the greater reward from the wealth hidden in infinite niches.

09/04/2013

Momentum is the digital-only imprint of Pan Macmillan Australia. Established in February 2012, we publish high quality ebooks globally. Our website and blog is the hub of our operation, and we’d like to include as many diverse voices as possible. Our blog currently hosts opinions from Momentum emplo...

09/04/2013

The epicness of J.K. Rowling's imagination.

28/03/2013

Amazon is buying Goodreads. This is rather big.

Oh, this is priceless. What a sales pitch for horn-blowing! Say Selden and McClain, what a wonderful page you have! Than...
28/03/2013

Oh, this is priceless. What a sales pitch for horn-blowing! Say Selden and McClain, what a wonderful page you have! Thank you John McClain, coming from you that means so much!

Cracking up over here.

Author Brandy Nacole has promo swag. Lots of promo swag. We're jealous.
24/03/2013

Author Brandy Nacole has promo swag. Lots of promo swag. We're jealous.

Goodies!

From killing your babies to starting as close to the end as you can, here are some very good tips from some very good wr...
24/03/2013

From killing your babies to starting as close to the end as you can, here are some very good tips from some very good writers.

Both aspiring and established writers will find inspiration among these writing tips from well-known writers on how they hone their craft.

23/03/2013

And speaking of which, everyone should get in on Writer's Digest. Lots of articles worth reading.

"To be a writer, all you need is hours and hours (and a library card). All that magic and inspiration aside, the fact is, you don’t need an MFA. There is no mystery to becoming a writer. It is simply dedication, heavy reading, heavy revising, and this I knew before I came here. Iowa gave me no new formula, just a confirmation of this basic truth of every profession. You must suffer for it. You must slave away to become any good. And while there are media and hype and frightening coincidences that make some people successful and some not so much, in the end, it is only about the work. As my favorite teacher, the brilliant Charlie Baxter says, “Good work gets found and it gets read.” That’s it.

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