Big Bro Novels (2024)

31/01/2024

haven't read this?😳 you missing out on some plot twist and drama.

29/01/2024

My Family's Fiance
Dec 19, 2023

Chapter 1 Family meeting

"Tring, tring" (phone wringing). I wonder who's calling me at this time, I'm
trying to get some sleep man!

I reached out to my phone and answered it without knowing who is calling me.

Bheki: Hello who's this?

Phone: Hi Bheki it's me Siyanda.

Bheki: Siyanda? Why are you calling me at this time man? I'm trying to get
some sleep you know.

Phone: Yeah sorry bud but we kinda have a problem.

Bheki: Problem? What problem?

Phone: They just robbed the bank down the street and the captain wants you to
investigate the issue.

Bheki: But it's my day off today tho, can't they send someone to go and
investigate for me just for today? I can take over the case from tomorrow. And
who the f*ck robbs a bank at 8 am in the morning let alone a bank near the
police station?

Phone: The captain said he wants you today man and if you can solve this you
are getting a rase.

Bheki: Mhmm I don't know man, I already made plans for today.

Phone: Just pospone them.

"trutum" (phone call ended)

Damnit he hung up on me. I guess I can't do anything but go and investigate
then. This is a pain though to be honest. Couldn't they ask someone else to
handle this? Why me?

I got ready as quickly as possible and headed down to the bank. When I got
there were already police officers waiting and the place was covered with
yellow tape while everyone who was at the bank when the robbery happened still
there.

Before I could do anything else I went to speak to the cashier that got robbed
and asked her everything that occured during the robbery. The answers I got
were satisfying for my case. Firstly there were three robbers, four with the
get away driver. Two of the robbers went straight to the cashier while one of
them ordered the security guard to be on the lookout for police. The security
guard was cooperative according to the cashier. Continues in the comment section.

29/01/2024

My family's fiance intro.

My name is Bheki, I live alone in my apartment in Durban. My occupation, well I am a Detective & the best one there is. Since I am a Detective and live alone my parents are worried that my job is keeping me away from living a normal life and having a grilfriend. They've tried like five times to hook me up with someone & gosh I have to say my dad doesn't have taste in women. Don't get the wrong idea, my mom is pretty cute but the girls my hook me up with...heh not very much. Sometimes I think he does this to spite me you know.

29/01/2024

It's been a long time since I posted here but I'm dropping a new story in 10 minutes peeps & it's called "My family's fiance".❤️

21/09/2023

Hey everyone, i hope y'all are having a wonderful week and you're enjoying your exams, even though mine gave me hell but that's not the point though. What i want to say now is thank you to everyone who's following my page and have been reading my stories. The feedback you guys gave me was amazing.

So today i was watching this anime 'My happy marriage' and i just thought that i should share this with you guys. It is one of the best written anime in my opinion. It combines the romance and action very well and the drama is just on another level. Ohh and big ups to netflix too for the top tier animation quality. If you're interested in anime check the comment section.

19/09/2023

Insert 7

'mia: i'm sorry romeo but please get out of my room.

She said that with tears on her face. I was so confused like why the sudden change of mood?

I took my stuff and called my uncle to take me home. I told him what happened on the way and his response was "well that's how women are mtshana, one moment y'all fine then boom she's mad at you. " That wasn't really helping the situation but thanks malome.

On Monday morning when i got to school the gents were already there waiting for to tell them how my date with mia went.

gift: yow Rom.
me: hey guys.
gift: woah why are you so down man?
royce: don't tell me mi...
me: nothing happened.
gift: yeah we can see.
royce: what happened?
me: i don't know bro, first thing i know is that she was kissing me and all of a sudden she got upset with me touching her.
royce: sheesh that's rough. well hardluck man.
leo: at least you got a kiss dude.
gift: yeah leo's right, at least you got something.
me: so what should i do now guys?
royce: i say go talk to her about what happened, maybe it was the way u touch her that made her go tripping at you.
me: neh? yeah maybe i should go talk to her.

So i did talk to mia that day, she wanted nothing to do with me. All she said was "not now romeo".i wonder what did i do wrong. Maybe kissing lesedi wasn't one of the brightest ideas huh. Well maybe i should speak with Hayley, maybe she might know what i did wrong, although she might also be mad at me, she saw me kissing lesedi.

The following day which was Tuesday i saw Hayley during brake time alone, which was odd by the way because she's always with gift or mia. I went to talk to her, i needed answers for why mia was upset at me.

me: hey hayl's
hayley: ohh hey romeo.

She sounded like she didn't want to speak to me at all,never mind that she didn't even look at me.

check the comment section

15/09/2023

Insert 6

After the movie mia invited me to her house. Man was i excited. When we got the only her big sister was home Sarah, she was a cool person though. We went to mia's room and it was so gorgeous. It was clean, and not to pink or to Disney. That's how girl's room looks like nowadays.

mia: I never had a boy up here before.
me: you're joking right?
mia: no, you're the first.

Awesoooooome!!!! 1-0 to romeo!!

I was really happy to be the first boy to see mia's room. I bet the guys won't believe this.

me: so have you been to any guy's room before?
mia: no.

Ohhh yessss!! another one! romeo strikes again 2-0 now.

me: so you're a virgin huh?

So that was a stupid question.

me: what i mean is... uhm you know... uhh that you never like had a guy here before.
mia: (laughing) haha you so funny.

I was really glad she found that funny cause that was really creepy.

mia: honestly yeah i am still a virgin romeo and i plan to be one till i get married.
me: why, nothing wrong with loosing your virginity before getting married.
mia: i know but i prefer to be one till i get married. I want my future husband to get a full package.
me: ohh what a lucky guy he's gonna be. I wish i could be him.
mia: yeah me too.
me: really?
mia: yes.
me: maybe i wil be your husband then. (laughing)

3-0!!

mia: romeo...tell me something.
me: yeah?
mia: am I attractive to you?

4-0!

me: of cause, mia you're like the prettiest girl i've ever seen and i'm sure any guy at school would wanna be your boyfriend.
mia: I'm asking this because all the guys at school are always asking me out and you never do, even now i know that your friends are the ones that persuaded you to ask me out.
me: you wanted me to ask you out?
mia: yes, ever since Grade R.
me: what?
mia: remember when you helped when those big kids were bullying me? when they beat you up instead of me.
me: i'd rather forget that.

continues in the comment section.

14/09/2023

Insert 4

'Gift: bro you messed up big time man.
me: hima-wait how do you know she saw me?
Gift: i was with her man.
me: damn!! can't you do anything about it Gift? I mean Hayley is your girlfriend right?
Gift: she saw what she saw man so i don't know.
Royce: What were you thinking Romeo?
Leo: serves you right Romeo, that's what happens when you think you're a player.
me: shut up man, you never kissed a girl in your entire life.
Leo: so that's how you want it to be then?
Gift: you might aswell kiss your chances with mia goodbye Rom.

Well i messed up big time. There's no chance in hell Hayley won't tell mia what happened. There's still some glimpses of hope though, mia hasn't canceled our date on saturday yet. Maybe Hayley didn't see anything at all and Gift was just exaggerating. Yes that would make sense or why else hasn't she cancelled yet? Maybe i should stop panicking for a moment.

After some time mia texted me, she sent me pics of dresses and asked which one i prefer her to wear for me on saturday. I sighed in relief, Hayley didn't see anything after all and to think leo and gift made a fuss about it. So i chose this beautiful short red dress. It looked sexy as f**k. I could see all of mia's beautiful curves in it. Am i a lucky guy hey? The only thing that was on my mind was mia.'

Chapter 2 The Date.

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sphe: dad why did you kiss another while you were still gonna go on a date with mom.
me: it was a mistake, i didn't know what i was doing back then sweety. I would advise you to not do what i did, that might break someone's heart.
kuhle: I bet you didn't think that when when you were kissing lesedi dad.
mia: (laughing)
me: look guys i was young.
kuhle: we are young too dad.
me: okay let me just continue with the story.

'So the day had finally arrived, i romeo majoqo would be going on a date with the most beautiful girl in the entire school mia williams.'

sphe: mom your surname was williams?
Continues in the comment section.

13/09/2023

Insert 3

mia: did i scream romeo all day long?
kuhle: ....?
me: baby? the kids(whispering)
mia: ohh yeah( laughing) sorry.

'So when i got home i had a smirk on my face. My sister kept asking why i was in a good mood all of a sudden. I couldn't tell her that i was gonna sleep with the cutest girl at school. You know what they say right? Don't count your chickens before your eggs hatch.

ronda: so u not gonna tell me why you are in a good mood all of a sudden?
me: sis i want to tell you neh but you'll have to wait.
ronda: really? is mia finally gonna make u smash?
me: wait how did you know? oops! wait what? How did u know?
ronda: i didn't it was just a guess.
me: what?
ronda: bro you always told me that you like her and you'd run around the whole country naked if she would let you smash.
me: am i running around the country naked now?
ronda: with that creepy smirk on your face? Yes. Yes you are. bro u gotta stop smiling like that, it's gonna creep mia out trust me.
me: shut up. I'm going to my room.

I walked into my room.

ronda: hey romeo wait, bro! When are you and mia banging?

The following day at school.

Leo: ohh wait isn't that Lesedi?
Gift: ohh man that's her.
Leo: is that romeo talking to her?
Gift: that idiot, doesn't he realise that mia and lesedi don't like each other and to make things worse, lesedi is his girlfriend and he still has a date with mia.
Leo: well that's romeo for you, always thinks he is a pl***oy.
Gift: i just hope he doesn't regret what he is doing.
Hayley: hey guys.
Gift: hey Hayle's
Leo: hey Hayley. Gift, i'll catch you in class bro.
Gift: sure.
Hayley: why is leo leaving? What were you two talking ab... wait is that romeo kissing lesedi?
Gift: ohh wait they kissing!? Ohh man what is romeo doing?
Hayley: good bye gift, i have somewhere to be.
Gift: Hayley wait! Oh man this will not end good. what in the world is romeo thinking right now? I better find Royce.

Few minutes later. continues in comment sec

10/09/2023

Insert 2

'I kept starring at her...

royce: just go to her and say hello.
me: what!? are u crazy?
royce: since when are u afraid of a girl romeo?
me: well that's not any girl royce, that's mia the cutest girl in the entire schol.
royce: okay i get she is cute but does that mean u are afraid of her?

Royce didn't really understand how i felt, i could talk to any girl at school but not mia. Everytime i tried talking to her i would always bite my tongue, my heart would stop beating and sometines i would start hallucinating and sometimes i would picture our wedding.

Later that day at school during brake royce made fun of me infront of the others. Leo of all people was laughing. That was new, since when is Leo a lady expect?

me: leo why are u laughing bro?
leo: heh, its not everyday that the mighty romeo romeo trembles infron of a girl. But i don't blame u ntwana yaka. (my boy)
gift: we might have found rom's weakness haha.
royce: she might have used ikorobela (love potion) bro cause wow.
leo: neh?
royce: rom, there she goes again this is your chance ro redeem yourself.
me: okay.

Well i approached her. She was alone. I saw her looking at me and she smiled but looked the other direction again.

me: hey.
mia: yeah?

Then i remembered, the reason i'm always trembling around mia isn't that i'm obsessed or afraid of her, it's just because she's always rude to me for some reason.

me: how are you?
mia: get to the point romeo
me: well uhm uhh i...
mia: what?
me: would you by any chance uhm be available Sat?
mia: yeah why?
me: i have tickets for this new movie that i just saw trending and i wondered if....
mia: sure, i'll be there.
me: huh?
mia: i said i'm going.
me: ohh okay then i'll see you sat.

That was way to easy. I wonder what went right that time. This is where i thought i won heh, if i only knew that this was far from being over.'

mia: i wonder what took u so long to finally ask me out, i loved u since kindergarten and i had to wait 12 years for you to say you love me.
me: how could I have known that you liked me? I mean you were always rude to me.
mia: i couldn't have just told u that i liked you and besides all you ever did was try to show of infront of me or make me jealous.
kuhle: mom you loved dad for that long?
mia: yes but he didn't realise it until gr11, he was so dumb.
me: okay back to the story guys.

'royce: so how did it go?
me: i got a date.
the boys: haaa that's the rom we know.
royce: so u banging her sat then.
me: you know it brother, she'll be screaming romeo all day long.' To be continued

09/09/2023

How I Met My Wife
Sep 9, 2023

How i met my wife

Chapter 1

Insert 1

Well here i am living a wonderful life with my wife and two daughters. Life
was never as wonderful as easy this though, back in my days it was tough.

Right now i'm spending time with my two wonderful daughters Siphesihle and
Siphokuhle and yes they are twins, beautiful twins too. They like the pretiest
things i've ever seen just like their mother but, hey do have my smile. That's
something at least from my side.

sphe: Dad can u tell us a story?
kuhle: yes dad, we love your stories.
me: but i don't have any stories left to tell u guys, i told u all the stories
i know.
sphe: pleaaaase.
me: okay fine which one do u wanna hear?
kuhle: how about how u met mom, u never told us that.
me: mhhm okay but this is a long story though, it wilk take us hours.
kuhle: we got time dad.

Mia walked in looking as gorgeous as ever. Still don't know how she enden up
with a sucker like me. I mean look at her look at me. Well gotta say i'm the
luckiest guy ever.

mia: thought i'd find u guys here.
sphe: mom you're home!
me: hey babe, you're early today.

I got up and gave her a soft kiss on her chin. Still gives me chills.

mia: we closed off early today. what are u guys doing here anyways?
kuhle: dad was about to tell us a story on how u guys met.
mia: really? good thing i brought snacks with me cause this is gonna take long.
me: u wanna hear the story too?
mia: of cause! It's not everyday you get to hear your husband telling his kids
a story on how he met their mother. hehe.
me: okay then buckle up.

'15 years ago i was a high schooler in grade 11. i wasn't one of the well
mannered learners at school but i was hella smart. I was always in the top 10
but i was still a trouble maker though. I had a squad back then, we called
ourselves the gang bangers. '

sphe: did u really have a squad dad?
mia: he did haha, they were so dumb!
me: hey we weren't that bad.
mia: yeah you were, and i wonder what ever happened to your sqaud members
Royce, Leo and... who was the other one again?
me: Gift?
mia: yeah him.
me: now that u mention it i also wanna know where they are now or what they
busy with.
sphe: carry on with the story dad.
me: oh yeah right, sorry.

'My squad consisted of 4 members namely me, Royce, Leo and Gift. We were like
the best buddies in the whole school. We always hung around girls. If u ever
wanted to know where we were u just had to look for a group of beautiful girls,
you'll always find us there. There was one day where i was on my way to school
with Royce, on our way we stumbled upon a dazzling sparkling young lady, she
was surrounded by a lot of girls but she was shining all alone.'

mia: awwa baby no you're exagerating now.
me: heehee look who's blushing.
sphe: dad continue please.
me: right, sorry.

'It wasn't my first time seeing this stunning young lady, I saw her almost
everyday when i'm going to school. And i felt the same way all those times too.

royce: there goes you're crush romeo.
me: hey cut it out, she's not my crush bro.
royce: ohh yeah? then tell me why is it that your cheeks turn pink everytime
you see her?
me: my cheeks turn pink? it must be an allergy.
royce: c'mon man, u don't even convince yourself with a lie like that and
besides that girl like you back man.
me: how do u know that?
royce: she always leaves her house the time we leave ours.
me: coincidence.
royce: really? we left 20 mins earlier two days back and she did the same, we
left 13 mins later yesterday and she did the same. Is that a coincidence.
me: heh'

mia: hey that was a coincidence.
me: yeah right.

01/08/2023

Thank you all guys for the wonderful reviews u sent me, I really appreciate them even though i wish u guys would interact more on my page because that's what keeps me writing my stories. Give me at least one comment per post and i'll give u one part or two today❤🙏🏽

30/07/2023

Storms of Betrayal

Part 21

I can't believe that girl wouldn't give me her number. Who was she anyways? And why do i feel like i've known her my whole life? Lemme call big bro Jaden.

Dominic: Big bro Jaden, how are you?
Jaden: Dom, i'm all good man how are you?
Dominic: Yeah i'm fine, look bro there's this cute lady looking for ya and i believe she's heading over to you right now.
Jaden: Who is she and why is she looking for me?
Dominic: She didn't tell me her name and she looked right about 2 years older than you.
Jaden: ohh okay, i'll be waiting for her then.
Dominic: is she your side chick or something?
Jaden: what!? I don't have any side chicks.
Dominic: ohh, don't do sis Zintle like that bro, she loves you since high school.
Jaden: Okay good bye Dominic.

The bastard just hung up on me. I hope he isn't cheating on Zintle though.

Jaden's Pov

Jaden: Babe, there's a woman who's coming here looking for me. That's what Dominic said at least.
Zintle: Why is she looking for you though?
Jaden: Honestly i don't know honey. We'll find out when she gets here.

Continues in the comment section

28/07/2023

The Storms of Betrayal Volume 2

Part 20.

I just got back from work, found my baby zintle in the kitchen preparing dinner. She's become a great cook by the way. Ohh before i forget, i now work as a Maths teacher at a private school in Cape Town, i'm being payed really good by the way and my girl zintle has her own catering company. Things have been going great for us and i'm planning on engaging her soon.

Jaden: Hey baby i'm home.
Zintle: Honey i missed you.

she came to me running and jumped on me and kissed me afterwards.

Zintle: Here, let me take your jacket babe.
Jaden: No relax babe, just take care of the pots for me please, i am really hungry.
Zintle: ohh okay, i made your favourite meal by the way.
Jaden: really, i thought u were my favourite meal.
Zintle: (giggles) stop playing jaden.
Jaden: But i'm not playing though.
Zintle:(blushes)
Jaden: ohh!!! Zintle the food!!
Zintle: oops! just put your jacket with the rest of the laundry i'll do it tomorrow. (running to the kitchen)
Jaden: ohh okay.

I put my bag on the sofa and headed to the bathroom to take a bath, i really needed one after the day i just had.

*Meanwhile*

Dominic's pov

Dominic: I'm telling you guys, i swept her off her feet.
Thomas: Yeah right, like we suppose to believe that. That girl was way outta our league man and u didn't even get her number.
Romeo: He thinks we fools.
Thomas: Look there's a cutie over there Dom go to her right now.
Dominic: How much will you give me when i get her number?
Thomas: 500 bucks?
Dominic: Deal.

I'm going to show these idiots what i'm made of. They think i can't get a girl's number. Me? Dominic Davids? Heh.

The girl they asked me to approach was out of my league though to be honest. She looked 6 years older than me, wonder what she's doing at campus. She doesn't look like a student. Well i need the R500.

Continues in the comment section

26/06/2023

Storms of betrayal Part 19

Justice for Jaden.

Zintle: (dying voice) i know how you feel jaden, i love you too. This is it for me though, i really enjoyed spending the last moments of my life with you.
jaden: Zintle no don't say that i don't want you to die. I had a vision of us zeigh. you are suppose to be the mother of my children, youbare suppose to be mrs davids. kayla wanted to see u in my house with your makoti attire and now she can't see that but i want to zeigh. so please don't die.
Zintle: listen to me jaden, me and kayla will be waiting for you where im going. she is gonna see what she wanted to see on the other side.

she put her hand on my shoulder and lost her consciousness. My head was on my lap and her mouth was just full of blood. I looked at where my father and andile was. My father was also shot, i looked dead. Looked like he was shot straight in the skull. Andile on the other hand was shot on his left arm. The shooter came quickly and took my mother. Upon exiting the gate of the warehouse, they came upon two police vans and an ambulance.

My dad was announced dead on the scene. Zintle was admitted to the hospital, her condition was very bad.

Four years later.

Katlego never really admitted why he was working with my mother but he got a life sentence and 20 for murder and two attempted murders.Yes Zintle did survive. We now live in our own apartment in Cape Town. By the way, Andile took me and Dominic in after our father died. He is now in varsity studying to become an astrophysicist, the next einstein. This is the end of my first journey, a new one will come soon🥺🙏

Next story Powers of Nature❤

26/06/2023

Storms of betrayal Part 18

The truth is revealed? Moments of betrayal.

Dominic's Pov

Man, i need a break right now. If i continue playing im gonna lose again and that'll make me mad. This master league can really suck sometimes. Why is it scripted? I need to play GTA to cool my mind off. Where was that game again? Was it in the basement? I don't know but i should probably go look for it.

I went to the basement to look for my game. I found a box full of paper. I knew the game wouldn't be there but something told me to just look and check what's inside. I found papers of my father's life insurance. I wonder why dad was checking his balance. Does he think he'll die soon? Let me text jaden and tell him about this. What if dad is in trouble?

Jaden's pov

Jaden: What do u mean Zintle?
Zintle: Jaden, think about it. When that katlego guy started running, i still had the signal of the phone for about a minute the after that when we all were distracted i lost signal. It couldn't have been that guy cause he was running and he had no chance.
andile: what you are saying now zintle aligns with my theory. I suspected that someone within us could be working with the bad guys. The other day when we went to lerato, we caught her trying to skip town. It was like she was running from us. My question was how did she know we are coming for her? Someone must have told her and the only people who knew about that was us and the people at the station.

Damn they're right. I know its not me but who could it be? Zintle and Andile have no gain in killing my sister. My father wouldn't too, he loved kayla more than anyone. Dominic is not even here so it couldn't have been him and he's too young to pull a stunt like that. Mom, we shouldn't even consider her as a suspect. No mother in the world would kill her daughter.

I just got a text from Dom, dad was checking his balance on his life insurance.

jaden: dad? are u going to die?
dad: no, why would u ask that?
jaden: dominic found some of your insurance paper at the basement. You've checked your balance on the 18th of january.
dad: he must be mistaken. I didn't...

Wait, i've heard this before... (Flashback part 7) I remember asking my mother to call dad the day kayla disappeared and she said she'll call him, i saw her calling but that said she didn't call. Who was she calling? Come to think of it, why did she get the tip of Tumi's body instead of Andile and Dad? Now the life insurance paper at our house? If dad didn't take those then it must have been her, she's the only one who would have had access to that. No she can't have access to that, someone from the company gave them to her. Now way is it a coincidence we find her in the same location of kayla's phone.

The day kayla disappeared she asked for dad's location a day after she got the insurance papers coincidence? No it just so happens that kayla was driving dad's when she was calling. Was kayla and tumi supposed to die? But how is katlego and Lerato related to this? How could my mother do such a thing.

jaden: mom, its you isn't it?

Everyone was shocked when i said those words.

jaden: kayla and tumi weren't suppose to die weren't they?
dad: jaden, what are you talking about?

She got down on her knees and started crying.

mom: it was supposed to be him. (pointing dad's way)
zintle: but why mrs davids? he's your husband.
mom: zintle, jaden run!! (screaming in tears)
jaden: mom what are u saying? (crying)
mom: if u don't you all will die. ( crying)

She isn't making any sense at all.

Andile: woman what's wrong with you?
jaden: mom, who is gonna kill us?
mom: them. (Pointing at a guy with a mask with a gun on his hand aiming towards us.)

I just heard gunshots. they were shooting at my father and andile. I quickly went for zintle's wrist and pulled her so that we can run away but instead of running she fell hard down on the ground. I turned to look at what the problem was, she was bleeding on her right side of the chest. A bullet got her.

jaden: andile!!!! they got zintle. (bursring down in tears) mom this is all your fault. Why do u hate me so much mom?
mom: jaden i...i don't hate you my son.
jaden: ohh yeah? Why is it that u wanna hurt all the people i love. you wanted to kill my father and u ended up killing kayla and you tried your stupidity again now look my friend is dying right infront of me.
mom: jaden im sorry, i didn't mean to.
jaden: call the ambulance you god dammit!! You didn't mean to? I don't know why i even call you my mother anymore. Andile, Andile, dad help!!

Damn it, they can't hear me with all the shooting.

mom: im sorry jaden, i cannot call the ambulance. If you i do they'll come with the police and i'd be arrested.
jaden: how are you even my mom? my phone fell when grabbing zintle(low crying voice) zintle hang on baby, don't die please. At least give me the chance to tell you how i feel.

Rate this story so far out of ten please🥺

24/06/2023

Before i post part 18, who do u think the culprit is guys? Zintle made a bold statement claiming that the culprit has to be one of them.

24/06/2023

Storms of Betrayal Part 17

The enemy is within us.

Jaden's pov.

I just got home from school and i found my lil bro playing video games, i looked around for my mom but i couldn't find her. Which is odd by the way, im pretty sure she was suppose to be taking a day off today.

jaden: hey dominic, where is mom?
dom: she said she has some business with someone in town, she'll be back soon though.
jaden: ohh, what are u playing.
dom: im playing master league on pes.
jaden: just make sure not to play becoming a legend okay? cause im still busy with that.
dom: yeah i know.

I went to my room to change. I w***e my grey shorts with a white t-shirt. Soon i was on my phone on facebook as usual. While scrolling on my news feed, i come across a post that Kayla posted a long time ago. I started bursting down in tears and having flashbacks. Me and her used to really get along when we were young. There was this other day where we pranked mom and dad, we put glue on their favourite sofa's. The beating we got that day. As i was scrolling past it i noticed something, her account had a green icon indicating that she's online. How could this be though? Is she still alive? I quickly called zintle.

jaden: hey zintle, Are you home yet?
zintle: yes i am why?
jaden: look at kayla's account on facebook, its online. Could you try and track her phone?
zintle: if it is her phone that she's online with i could but if its another phone then no. Did you try calling it?
jaden: no
zintle: well try calling it, ill see what i can do.
jaden: okay thanks.

I tried calling her phone and surprisingly it rang. I'm hoping zintle isn't having much troubles locating the phone though. Now it was a waiting game.

Moments later i got a call from zintle. My hopes were high, i was praying in my mind that she was able to locate the phone. I answered the call, took a huge breathe.

zintle: i was able to locate the phone.

More tears came out, is she alive?

continues in the comments.

23/06/2023

Part 17 tomorrow morning at 10:00😩❤

23/06/2023

Some insights before part 17.

Andile suspects that someone in the Davids or at the station is working with the serial killer. An officer claims that the disappearance of 19 year old girls with they boyfriends is just a cover up to keep police on a wild goose chase. As of now, Andile suspects Katlego and Lerato. Katlego's whereabouts on the day of kayla's disappearance is still a mystery. Lerato doesn't seem like a big game player according to andile but he is pretty certain he played a big role. The mystery is now, did they mean to kill kayla or was it a mistake. At the moment its pretty certain Katlego had something going on with tumi.

Could that have been the trigger? Could kayla have been at the wrong place at the wrong time?

What are your thoughts on this?

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