02/07/2024
โณ If I had just 10 minutes to fix a client's homepage copy, here's what I'd do:
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Repetition makes a message more memorable. Plus, studies show people are more likely to believe information when they read it more than once.
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๐ ๐๐๐ ๐๐?โโitโs the number one thing website visitors care about. This has to be at the top of the page.
3. ๐น๐๐๐๐๐ ๐๐๐ ๐๐๐๐ ๐๐ ๐๐๐๐๐
๐๐๐๐ ๐๐๐ ๐๐๐๐ ๐๐๐ ๐๐๐๐๐๐
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๐. It displays confidence. I'd include statements like: โWhen you receive your (product name)...โ or โYouโre going to love the (specific feature)...โ
4. ๐ท๐๐๐๐ ๐๐๐ ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐. I'd add social proof, case studies, testimonials, etc after every expectation that's been set with the audience.
5. ๐จ๐๐ ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐ ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐. Theyโre a great way to subtly influence without being pushy. (I.e. "What project will you tackle first with our app?")
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