09/10/2021
A LOOK AT COMPOUND SENTENCES ...
English has four types of sentence structures: simple, compound, complex, and compound-complex. In this review, we'll discuss what a compound sentence is.
"A compound sentence is one that includes at least two independent clauses that are connected by a conjunction and a comma or by a semicolon."
EXAMPLES —
(Ricky went to the park on his bike,) (and Bobby went on
his skateboard.)
(I would like a black pen,) (but Vanessa would like a
blue one.)
(They haven't said who the new superintendent will be;)
(they will announce it tomorrow.)
Each main (independent) clause in the examples is isolated within brackets. In the first two sentences, the independent clauses are each joined by a coordinating conjunction (and, but). In the third example, the two main clauses are connected by a semicolon.
Let's look at a couple more examples to reinforce what a compound sentence is:
(Aileen works for a pharmacy,) (and Chinaka works at
a research facility.)
(The Chicago Cubs won the World Series in 2016;) (it was
their first since 1908.)
In this first example, two main clauses are joined by the coordinating conjunction 'and'. In the second example, two main clauses are connected by a semicolon.
COMPOUND SENTENCE: Discern From Compound Predicate —
In understanding what a compound sentence is, it's important that we not confuse a compound sentence with a compound predicate.
As we've discussed, a COMPOUND SENTENCE has two separate main clauses joined by a coordinating conjunction or a semicolon. A COMPOUND PREDICATE, on the other hand, involves two or more actions (verbs) performed by the same sentence subject within the same clause.
· Compound Sentence ...
(Shane drove a Chevy Impala in 1976,) (and he washed it
every week.)
· Compound Predicate ...
(Shane drove a Chevy Impala and washed it every week
in 1976.
In the first sentence, we describe two actions as two separate main clauses. In the second sentence, we have one subject (Shane) performing two actions (drove and washed) within a single main clause; this is an example of a compound predicate.
Let's consider one more comparison for good measure:
· Compound Sentence ...
(Wanda studies forensic science,) (but she wants to be
a veterinarian.)
· Compound Predicate ...
(Wanda studies forensic science but wants to be
a veterinarian.)
In the first example, two main clauses joined by a conjunction express two separate thoughts as a compound sentence. In the second example, the same sentence subject (Wanda) performs both actions (studies and wants) in the same main clause.
COMPOUND SENTENCE: Avoid Loose Constructions —
As writers of English, we want to communicate with precision and eloquence. Expressing ourselves with succinct constructions helps to achieve this.
For good technique, we should avoid writing compound sentences that become aimless and loose. A common cause is stringing together multiple clauses rather than dividing them for clarity, pacing, and focus.
EXAMPLES –
Judith visited her aunt, and they had tea, but they also
played backgammon, and then Judith kissed her good-bye.
This sentence is a wandering report of what transpired between Judith and her aunt. We could improve it in a few different ways:
Judith visited her aunt for tea. They played backgammon,
and then Judith kissed her good-bye.
Judith visited her aunt to have tea and play backgammon.
Afterward, Judith kissed her good-bye.
Judith visited her aunt. They had tea and played
backgammon, and then Judith kissed her good-bye.
Be mindful of your sentence structure, and be sure to take every opportunity to tighten up your writing. I'll leave you with that final compound sentence.
(... The Grammar Book ...)